Bianca's advisor on draft version 0: "It's not clear. Make it more clear."
On v1: "It's quite vague..."
On v2: "Things are ambiguous..."
On v3: "It's not quite clear..."
On v4: "Things are not well-defined..."
...
On v23: "Things are still fuzzy..."
Bianca: "Did you ever consider getting your eyes checked?"
